“I don’t have any blind friends,” I said.Īs always, join the conversation in the comments section below, on SSMT Facebook or on Twitter to the Short Story Magic Tricks Monthly Newsletter to get the latest short story news, contests and fun. But if you had a friend, any friend, and the friend came to visit, I’d make him feel comfortable.” She wiped her hands with the dish towel. “If you love me, she said, “you can do this for me. She put down the knife she was using and turned around. She was the draining board doing scalloped potatoes. “Maybe I could take him bowling,” I said to my wife. Now this same blind man was coming to sleep in my house.

And that’s quite a trick on Carver’s part. Whether you believe in this narrator’s redemption or not, there’s no doubt that you’re going to stick along to hear about it. There’s no knocking that narrative voice though. And maybe that’s because the story’s use of a blind man is shallow and unoriginal. So he draws a cathedral for 10 minutes with a blind man one night? Now he suddenly strips away his obviously deep-rooted misogyny and learns how to function happily and generously in his marriage? Yeah, I’m not convinced.

But I don’t have any reason to think he truly has learned anything or changed. True, the narrator has gotten out of his own head and allowed himself to see the world from someone else’s perspective. The redemption in the end isn’t really redemption at all as far as I can tell. It’s a great way of winning the reader to a particular point of view, and Carver is a master of such a character. Hey, look, the narrator seems to be saying, I’m just a regular joe like you and I’m gonna tell you about this thing that just happened to me. It’s not dissimilar to a lot of Carver’s narrators. I do like the narrative voice an awful lot. It’s pretty much part of the American short story canon now, but it doesn’t really do it for me. To be honest, I’m not sure I really see (pardon the pun) what the big deal is about this story.

Today’s story features a man being made uncomfortable by the visit of his wife’s blind friend. Yesterday’s SSMT feature, “The Blind Man,” showcased a man made uncomfortable when visiting a friend and her blind husband. Winning the reader to the narrator’s point of view with a simple but effective narrative voice

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